First Chapter ~ First Paragraph Tuesday Intros
For
today's First Chapter First Paragraph Tuesday Intro, I'm featuring an
intro from an eGalley I'm planning on starting soon.
(W.W. Norton)
"It was a stricken love, but still love. It was the kind of love that gazed up at you from the bare white-flood of your headlights -- a wide-eyed love with the meekness of grass eaters. Soft fur, pink tongue, and if you got too close a whiff of mulch on the breath. This was the love she cherished for her husband .
The love had other moments. Of course it did. But its everyday form was vegetarian."
What do you think? Would you keep reading?
Sorry. A no from me!
ReplyDeleteI think I'd need to know more about it. Hope you like it. Here's Mine
ReplyDeleteHrm, based on this paragraph, I would say no.
ReplyDeleteNot grabbing me!
ReplyDeleteThis is a confusing paragraph...I might continue out of curiosity, though.
ReplyDeleteHere's MY TUESDAY MEMES POST
mine is posted
ReplyDeletehttp://myheartbelongs2books.blogspot.com/2012/10/teaser-tuesday-graceful.html
Oh yes! I love the imagery, and am smiling at the vegetarian statement right now. Excellent choice. I would totally keep reading this one!
ReplyDeleteweird! it doesn't sound quite human. I'm not sure if I'd keep going. kaye—the road goes ever ever on
ReplyDeleteNope, that was quite boring!
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ReplyDeleteOoo, I sense a challenge with this group! How about if you could hear the audio version of, say, the first 5 or so minutes? I'm just prepping the clip as a teaser today, and if any of you would be interested, will gladly come back and post it...see if it makes a difference.
ReplyDeleteI'd want to read more to decide. I am intrigued by the cover and how it ties in to the story.
ReplyDeleteMine is here.
Hmmm...based on that opener I would have to say probably not.
ReplyDeleteThis one is very intriguing! Yes, I would keep reading!
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